Took last night off from the work on Red 71 or anything for that matter. Experiencing a little burnout.

Tonight was better. I finished the revisions to the script and sent it off to Patrick and to Scott. This will most likely be the last revision before shooting starts on Monday.

The biggest change was adding a new character to the sequence at Jack Kenny's Roadhouse. This is a role for Carol Anne. I made her a barfly.

I also rearranged some of the action with Freddy and Shane and the final sequence in the club. It seems to read better, but I'm just the writer.

If Patrick approves, I am going to print all thirty copies I need for the crew. I'd rather get that done now than when I am pooped on Sunday night.